To finish I
can to say the money is a half to achieve an objective in life, can be to
travel all world, to buy a very expensive car , enjoy with family a very funny
vacations, study’s, help for someone, etc. Anything so we can pay will go at some point,
when I finally die or someone dies, the money becomes paper, a simple and
ordinary paper that does not serve us all. Instead, love, relationships and
people will last forever
A very
funny story about money is about my friend Paloma, her last year was found in
the street one hundred and eighty dollars. She could not believe it, ran to my
house to tell me what had happened and finally bought some beer and meat for a
roast all night with our friends. This history is a proof about the money and
how come and go away, when it is in our hands we must be responsible and caring
with its.
Dear Camila,
ResponderEliminarNº of words is OK, you have some problems to organize your ideas.
Check these comments please,
For me, (NO "the") money is not worth anything because just like it comeS, it goES
... Of course (NO "the") money helpS
...never let that be a very important (WHAT???) to live, at least for now I AM still (NO "be") a simple student(s).
Anyway I HAVE always worked TO have my own money because I don’t like to ask for IT FROM my parentS above all the money THEY SPEND ON NOT VERY IMPORTANT THINGS like PARTIES food and friends.
To finish I can to say (NO "the") money is a MEANS to achieve an objective in life, IT can be to travel all OVER THE world,
very funny vacations, STUDY,
A very funny story about money is about my friend Paloma, last year SHE found one hundred and eighty dollars IN THE STREET.
... This STORYis a proof about the money and how IT comeS and goES away, when it is in our hands we must be responsible and carE FOR IT.